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A snippet from Chapter 4 which is still being written. Everything subject to change on my whim.
"My my my…" a voice mocked in the distance. "Heck of a punch for someone as young as you"
The footsteps were getting closer and closer.
"Such a waste having to kill such potential. But I can't allow you to mature. Your existence is a threat to us. Too long has the fires of heaven controlled this country. It's time for a new age! One not bound by the decrepit decrees of your family. One where we are all truly free to choose our own destinies, pave our own paths. For that, you must die here, tonight."
She could tell that the killer was close now. Her breathing started getting more and more ragged as her mind went blank with fear. Tears streamed down her face, the realisation that she might actually die finally starting to dawn on her.
Mom… Dad… help…..
"No one's coming to save you. Stop resisting, and I'll show you mercy"
Completely disheartened, she could no longer find the energy to keep herself alert. Her heavy eyelids drooped and eventually closed. Time seemed to slow down, the echoes of the assailants footsteps grew longer and further apart.
"My my my…" a voice mocked in the distance. "Heck of a punch for someone as young as you"
The footsteps were getting closer and closer.
"Such a waste having to kill such potential. But I can't allow you to mature. Your existence is a threat to us. Too long has the fires of heaven controlled this country. It's time for a new age! One not bound by the decrepit decrees of your family. One where we are all truly free to choose our own destinies, pave our own paths. For that, you must die here, tonight."
She could tell that the killer was close now. Her breathing started getting more and more ragged as her mind went blank with fear. Tears streamed down her face, the realisation that she might actually die finally starting to dawn on her.
Mom… Dad… help…..
"No one's coming to save you. Stop resisting, and I'll show you mercy"
Completely disheartened, she could no longer find the energy to keep herself alert. Her heavy eyelids drooped and eventually closed. Time seemed to slow down, the echoes of the assailants footsteps grew longer and further apart.
Devious Journal Entry
Damn you Darkfall UW!
I now find myself sitting at my computer queuing up for hours in order to get a glimpse of the game before the servers crash once again.
Not doing much with my novel much either :(
Something I'm hoping to remedy soon.......
Devious Journal Entry
Chapter 3 Teaser
(the chapter is still being written, content not yet proof-read and/or edited. Teaser section of chapter subject to change without warning)
A sharp tingle down her spine jolted her into consciousness. Within moments, she was acutely aware of her surroundings, despite not having opened her eyes yet. She was lying in her bed, listening intensely to her surroundings for the source of her alarm. She could hear birds outside fluttering about, tweeting and chirping at each other. She could faintly hear the sound of running water from the stream nearby feeding off into the Hanul falls. The smell of burnt out candles filled the air
The need for Digital Prowess
I really need to learn to use Photoshop or something similar. Drawing with layers would make life soo much easier...
Devious Journal Entry
Been trying to get back into my novel writing. So hard to stay focused when I have all these distractions around me! (Anime, Manga, EVE, Light Novels, *work*) :P
written about 4 paragraphs of chapter 3, but i've lost/losing sight of the story i had originally thought up a long time ago... :(
I still remember the key scenes i want to have, but i can't remember how i had them linked, and the order of what some of my ideas go in. I THOUGHT THEM UP! HOW COULD I LOSE SIGHT OF THEM! :( :(
*sigh* I'll probably have to rethink a story again.
On a side note, i had/have an idea for a completely different and mind bending story. I wish i could put m
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