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A snippet from Chapter 4 which is still being written. Everything subject to change on my whim.


"My my my…" a voice mocked in the distance. "Heck of a punch for someone as young as you"
The footsteps were getting closer and closer.
"Such a waste having to kill such potential. But I can't allow you to mature. Your existence is a threat to us. Too long has the fires of heaven controlled this country. It's time for a new age! One not bound by the decrepit decrees of your family. One where we are all truly free to choose our own destinies, pave our own paths. For that, you must die here, tonight."

She could tell that the killer was close now. Her breathing started getting more and more ragged as her mind went blank with fear. Tears streamed down her face, the realisation that she might actually die finally starting to dawn on her.
Mom… Dad… help…..
"No one's coming to save you. Stop resisting, and I'll show you mercy"
Completely disheartened, she could no longer find the energy to keep herself alert. Her heavy eyelids drooped and eventually closed. Time seemed to slow down, the echoes of the assailants footsteps grew longer and further apart.

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John A. G.
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Australia
Studying Electrical and Aerospace Engineering at the University of Queensland, Australia

NOTE: I'm not a frequent updater, I do stuff with my story and photography in my free time, which is hardly ever due to my studies at the moment :(
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CaryAndFrankArts Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks so much for Faving!! :huggle:
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Gigo-pixnchip Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for the fave :)
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botagar Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Np!
Companion cube <3
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Gigo-pixnchip Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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katetrista Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the fav! ^_^
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botagar Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The drawing was incredibly cute, i just had to!
:)
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katetrista Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, thank you! ^_^ Haha :D
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JStedman Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Interface Designer
Finally watching my profile.... it's about time, punk!

Kekeke.
I'm kidding.

Thanks for the watch! <3
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botagar Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i tots forgot 'bout dis. warui~! :P
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JStedman Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Student Interface Designer
HAR HAR HAR.
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